You can see from the picture below, a monologue that was created for me from Hannah, another member in our group. This monologue is to be used in the masquerade ball scene and it has been written in a Beckett style and represents a flashback of the characters life.
The next image shows how I have developed the monologue. I have added in more 'sniffs' and 'scratches' as I feel this emphasises the idea of disease and contagion. I have also shifted some words around slightly as I feel as though they sounded better switched.
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