Feedback Sheets

Here is the feedback that we received from our target audience after them watching our performance.

Developing the performance - PMD2

This pictures show the planned improvements that were made for the performance. Some of the ideas include things such as adding more detail to the pre-show. The reason that we decided to do this was because we have the pre-show created but we hadn't given a concept to the piece. Therefore we came up with the set of being in street. We then decided to give each cast member a role that was associated with this. For example two people were acting as if they were in a café and we also had other concepts such as walking the dog and looking in a shop window.

We then had a scene by scene breakdown that outlined everything that needed to be completed in order to make the necessary changes to the performance.

The final two pages show the monologues that each character had. I had the role of overlaying the monologues so this is what the images represent. The lines that are highlighted in purple show the moment in which the monologue would be overlaid. However this idea was disregarded because during a dress rehearsal we tried overlaying the monologues and it didn't work very well as people got confused with when they were meant to be speaking and what point of the monologues they were at.

Set Design - Finished PMD2

Here you can see the completed set design that Charlotte and I have created for the performance.

Completed Rehearsal Schedule's - PMD4

Below are the pictures of the completed rehearsal schedules.

Scene by scene run through with feedback - CKR Lesson 11

This lesson was similar to our previous lesson where we went through scene by scene and we were given suggestions for each scene to improve.




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Making improvements to scenes - VDU Lesson 13

This lesson consisted of us carrying on making the amendments to the critiques that we had been given in our previous sessions. We focused specifically on the dance scene incorporating the rest of the cast into this scene to make it look more effective.

Dress Rehearsal

During this session, our group stayed on at school to have a dress rehearsal for the performance. We used costumes and we had the set design in place for this rehearsal.